Fiction
Writing Romance – Why Love can help Your Fiction
Sell
by Annette Young
When writing romance, put aside any cynical thoughts and focus
instead on innocent dreams and memories from your youth because
capturing that all important innocent essence is vital when
trying to portray that spark of attraction between two of
your characters. Writing romance can add sparkle to a scene
or indeed, depth to a character and as it can encompass different
layers for your characters, it provides glimpses of the person
you are trying to create. Writing romance scenes can be fun
for the writer too and it can help the story or novel to sell,
because romantic fiction is hugely popular in these stricken
financial times.
We all like escapism. Readers may want a story which has a
semblance of gritty realism but they also want stories of
hope, laughter and romance. Fiction needs to have aspects
of true life so that readers can relate to it and interlacing
romantic moments can produce feel - good factors throughout.
When writing romance just remember that it does not all have
to be hearts and flowers and over the top romantic gestures
to make it work, in fact, depending on the type of fiction
that you are planning to write, it can have variations of
romance which either carry or support the story as it unfolds.
Romance can also add much needed obstacles to the story and
these add weight to any storyline and draw the reader in.
Obstacles work in a variety of ways because they add depth
to the characters and to the storyline but they also take
the reader on a voyage of discovery and leaves them wanting
to know whether the obstacles were finally overcome. Using
obstacles to prevent the romantic liaisons from progressing
also works incredibly well and the actions of the characters
involved then start to reveal a great deal about their personalities
going forward.
Of course, if writing a short story, word count is going to
be limited greatly and so the writer must know exactly what
the story is about and also how much romantic content it will
contain. Finding the relevant starting point is also important
and writing a compelling opening paragraph essential. All
readers secretly want a happy ending in some shape or form,
it doesn’t have to be that the romance works as long
as there is some hope that it has worked out for the best
or perhaps within those final paragraphs, there are hints
of a better alternative as the story closes. Sometimes leaving
out some information and avoiding finalising the story down
to the very last detail can have the reader’s imagination
soaring as they being to perceive those characters as three
dimensional entities and start to think about the plot, how
it progresses and ultimately ends.
Romantic interludes work well. The writer does not need to
write intense or heavily erotic scenes if they feel uncomfortable
with that, instead they can suggest a positive intensity between
their characters by well-crafted dialogue and descriptive
scenes. When writing romance, it is essential to provide dark
and light elements to vital scenes and allow the reader to
convey the subtle influences within the text.
Annette Young
Freelance Writer/Editor
www.creative-competitor.co.uk
Writing Short Stories – From Amateur to Professional
Status
by Annette Young
Writing short stories or poetry is where most writers begin
their long journey towards publication. It provides a perfect
creative outlet for those who have the feint stirrings of
a story to tell and wish to transfer those creative thoughts
to paper. Crafting a unique and well-rounded story is not
easy and there are many pitfalls but with a little help, success
is only a few steps away. When writing short stories, always
consider what you are trying to achieve. It is very easy for
the writer to become lost in the depths of their own imagination
and a 1000 word story can easily be trebled. Writing short
stories is an art form and it deserves a great deal of recognition
as the writer must be focussed and dedicated to the task at
hand.
There are many different story lengths available, writers
can choose to write flash fiction which can be anything from
approximately 50 words up to 1000, although many fiction magazines
seek out stories which also have had the chance to develop
and grow and these can be around the 2000 word mark.
Identifying a market for the story is the first step and
then once this has been determined, it is time to plan the
story in its entirety. Writing short stories that will sell
readily requires additional planning, so extend the market
research around the intended publication. For example, what
do you know about the readership? A story about a teenage
pregnancy is not going to be of interest to publications aimed
at those in their senior years unless the writer can make
it relate to them significantly.
Many writers fail at the first post by writing solely for
themselves. There is of course, nothing wrong with writing
for the sheer joy of creativity alone, but as many writers
would like nothing more than to see their story and name in
print, it is vital that those writers change their mind set
from that of an amateur to a professional and this will then
afford them much more opportunities and in fact, fuel that
creative fire even further.
When writing a story with a minimal word count, many writers
neglect to develop their characters fully but it is important
that the reader begins to connect with the characters and
start to care as to the outcome, otherwise the story will
lack interest for them. Allow the reader to identify with
a strong human interest angle and this will help keep them
interested and following through to the end.
Stories are around us all the time but it is our own unique
interpretation that makes the story come alive. As writers,
it is important that any witnessed mannerisms, characteristics
and events are all stored away for future use, as aspects
of events can be used in short stories, for example an old
creepy building that you may have observed in passing could
be used when trying to picture a haunted house for a ghost
story. Life produces unlimited opportunities for story tellers
everywhere but when writing short stories with a serious intent,
we have to make good use of this free material and then we
can go from amateur to professional quickly and easily.
Annette Young
Freelance Writer/Editor
www.creative-competitor.co.uk
Writing Horror – How to Terrify your Readers
by Annette Young
Writing horror stories that can immerse your readers completely
and make them relive the terror is something that most writers
in this genre are trying to achieve. It’s not always
easy though and a poorly written horror story can be almost
comedic in comparison. The writer has to establish a creative
and solid foundation to their story first which means knowing
the plot inside and out and then weave the suspenseful elements
into that existing plot. Writing horror may not be the easiest
genre to write in, but it can certainly be an exciting and
captivating one and a lesson in writing and building suspense.
When writing horror, it is important that the writer knows
the direction of the story as many writers begin their stories
without a clear sense of direction and this can lead to a
confusing plot with a myriad of limitless possibilities. If
the writer becomes confused, then it is quite certain that
the reader will be too. It is important that the reader finds
it easy to read the story irrespective of whether it’s
a short story or a novel. Why make it hard on the reason to
immerse them in the plot line?
If the thought of writing horror is a compelling one, then
make sure that you adhere to the following points:
· Consider the plot carefully and make it as original
as possible.
· Understand what ‘you’ are trying to
get across to your readers and don’t waffle.
· Think about word count. Assuming you would like
to get your work published, it is important to research the
publication you are likely to submit to. Sending 5000 words
to a publisher whose requirements are for stories with a 2000
word maximum word count is bound to end in a rejection.
· Create characters that almost jump off the page,
this means learning about those characters inside and out
before writing the story. Make sure they are 3 dimensional
and include characteristics that will tie in naturally with
your story.
· Consider where to create suspense for the reader.
· To write horror, it is always useful to consider
what frightens you on an individual level. If it frightens
you, then it equally could scare the reader.
· Remember that horror does not have to be gory;
fear can be escalated in a number of ways, in fact, sometimes
it is what the writer doesn’t say but merely hints at
that will begin to unnerve the reader. Let their imaginations
work.
· Consider your word count and then work out just
where the story needs to starts. A novel should have an exciting
opening but can build up the horror and suspense naturally.
A short story has to be written in an entirely different way.
· Create a title that intrigues and draws the reader
in.
Building an overall plan regarding your story can help save
time in the long run. It certainly helps to prevent the writer
from meandering within the plot and be able to confidently
move the plot forward. Don’t forget that for horror
stories, the pace of the story is extremely important as the
reader must be carried into the story from beginning through
to end and their attention must be held by your carefully
crafted words. So, when writing horror successfully - think,
plan and learn to write instinctively for maximum effect.
Annette Young
Freelance Writer/Editor
www.creative-competitor.co.uk
7 Steps To Success For Chick Lit Writers
And Authors
By Samantha Pearce
The 'chick lit' market is going from strength to strength
as more and more young women find that they can relate so
uncannily to the characters in these books. These books address
concepts that all women will face in some way and at some
time in their lives. Whether it be facing the dilemma of balancing
motherhood with a career; or whether it is having to make
the choice between a sensible life partner that your parents
would adore or choosing the rugged, good for nothing man that
sends your heart racing! Chick lits are invariably an easy
and light-hearted read written in a humorous tone and littered
with slang and clichés and modern cultural references
that young women can relate to.
A good chick lit read will contain the following key elements:
* A female lead: The main character will be struggling in
at least one if not all of the dimensions of her life. These
dimensions generally being her career, her love life and her
relationships with family and friends.
* A unique style of writing: Often being as a recount of
the heroine’s disastrous efforts in love and life, this
can sometimes be in a diary format, such as ‘Bridget
Jones’ Diary’, which was one of the more successful
‘chick lits’. The style of writing ensures that
the book can be picked up, read and enjoyed in short bursts.
* Humour: The book will generally highlight the character’s
failings or day to day happenings with a humorous slant.
* Sexual themes: A good chick lit will not shy away from
the inclusion of sex and it is often written about in a very
frank manner.
* Glamorous setting: These stories are often written around
the supposedly glamorous worlds of fashion or media, although
more often than not the story reveals that the reality is
not quite as the reader would expect.
* Modern references: References to the latest designer shoes
or to celebrity lives can often be found in a good chick lit
and it adds to the relevance that the reader can find within
the story.
* An unexpected twist: Although chick lits are expected to
be an easy read, the more successful books always have a quirky
outcome or twist that makes finishing the book even more worthwhile.
So if you want to write successful chick lit make sure you
incorporate these simple elements.
In this srticle you will find the elements that are essential
to the success of any chick lit manuscript.
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Writing for the sake of writing
By: Mikal Jhonson
What are the pros and cons of writing short stories and posting
them online for money as opposed to writing short stories
just for the sake of writing itself?
The first thing that a writer interested in writing online
stories as a means of living must accept is that it’s
not easy selling your online stories to willing publishers
over the Internet. While there may be a lot of literary agents
and publishers out there who may accept your works, the money
you can possibly get from writing short stories online is
not that big.
Of course there may have been a few writers out there who
found it quite easy to write short stories online for online
consumption but these are the distinguished few who have already
established a niche and a name in the online literary market.
Stephen King, being one of the most prominent examples, has
already tested the online waters with huge aplomb but that’s
because he has already created a name for himself publishing
horror novels in the traditional form prior to writing short
stories online.
In your case though, being one who is only starting on your
literary career, you may find it pretty difficult to penetrate
the market when writing short stories online. There might
be occasional websites who are willing to pay you decent sums
of money but as a general observation, the competition in
writing short stories online for money is really tight and
difficult. For instance, granted you write short stories online
impressively, but most of the online publishing houses would
just give you that proverbial glare because you are a new
author who has yet to establish a name in the literary market.
As such, it has always been recommended that you write short
stories online first for the sake of writing itself before
you plunge into using your writing for a living. Sign up to
some respectable writing websites for authors who have been
writing online stories. Publish your works there until such
a time that you’re already noticed by a wider online
readership other than your family and kin.
As soon as you have established your name in the various
writing websites, publishing companies will eventually notice
your talent in writing short stories and before you know it,
they’ll be tailing you off and asking you to write short
stories online for them. Good luck!
The first thing that a writer interested in writing online
stories as a means of living must accept is that it’s
not easy selling your online stories to willing publishers
over the Internet. While there may be a lot of literary agents
and publishers out there who may accept your works, the money
you can possibly get from writing short stories online is
not that big.
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Three Fiction Writing Concerns
by Kathryn Lively
One of the challenges an editor must face is polishing the
work of an author without erasing too much of that author's
style. If you follow a particular novelist, you might notice
over time particular quirks to dialog and narrative that shape
the author's unique voice, little things inspired to endear
readers over time. It may be a method of relaying a specific
dialect, a favorite phrase used in more than one book, or
even a mechanic style one doesn't often see in certain genres.
Fantasy authors, for example, may feature characters that
communicate by thought. To enhance this phenomenon to the
reader, use of italics denotes what is being thought, rather
than said. Some authors may take this device and imprint a
unique style by adding asterisks or other characters to further
emphasize the story. Other books may use different fonts to
express and highlight different aspect of their tales as well.
An author should be unique in writing style, and should possess
a voice that attracts readers and inspires them to want to
seek out books that mimic yours, rather than leave them guessing
for whom you take after. That said, there are a number of
tics that readers (and editors) may find more annoying than
amusing. In the spirit of previous articles on the subject
of style, I hereby submit three more personal nitpicks of
mine: devices and phrases I have seen in bestsellers and small
press offerings. The following are not necessarily incorrect
or improper, but may cause distraction if overused in a manuscript.
Grab a pen and proceed with caution.
1) There was no other word for it.
I can't tell you how many times I have suggested in edits
that authors strike this sentence from their works. It is
common narrative, used mainly to emphasize shock or surprise
as felt by a character.
When Brian pulled the gun on her, Darlene was flabbergasted.
There was no other word for it.
You think so? What about shocked, galled, puzzled, speechless,
amazed, surprised, or bewildered? A quick search in the Thesaurus
may produce more suitable words to describe how Darlene is
feeling, standing there at the end of a gun, wondering if
her life is about to end. Quite personally, were I in Darlene's
situation, one other word would come to mind...it's about
four letters long!
Is this phrase used incorrectly? Not really. Taking the scene
from Darlene's point of view, there could be no other words
to say. Having a gun pointed at your face doesn't necessarily
inspire anything verbose outside of screaming in fear or gasping
for breath. Is the phrase necessary? Not really. As a matter
of personal opinion, tacking on "there was no other word
for it" seems rather superfluous in this situation. If
there is no other word to describe what Darlene is feeling,
why not leave the scene at flabbergasted? Why add on dressing
to an already tense scene, when brevity better evokes a sense
of doom?
When Brian pulled the gun on her, Darlene was flabbergasted.
She grasped the doorknob for support and pressed a hand to
her chest to keep her heart from bursting. "What are
you doing?" she finally cried.
Continue with the action of the scene without unnecessary
words getting in the way, and keep Darlene alert in front
of that gun.
2) Heads-a-hoppin'
When I send manuscripts for evaluation, one thing I ask readers
to look for is concise differentiation of point of view. Are
scenes constructed in a manner that one point of view is presented
clearly? Otherwise, does the narrative appear too jumbled
with too many voices shouting to heard over the others?
In fiction, third person point of view is easily the more
popular style - over first-person, where the story is told
entirely by one character, either a lead (e.g. Janet Evanovich's
Stephanie Plum) or an observer of the leads (e.g. Fitzgerald's
Nick Carraway, who tells the story of Gatsby and Daisy), and
the rarely used second person (see Bright Lights, Big City
for an oft-used example). Within the third person point of
view are two distinctive styles: limited, which presents the
story told from the perspective of a character based only
on what he/she knows, and omniscient, where the character's
perspective of things is broader. In the case of omniscient
point of view, the narrative might not even be told from the
perspective of an active character, but an outsider watching
and sensing everything that happens.
In a book written in the third person limited point of view,
the perspective does not have to be limited to one character.
In romance especially, point of view may switch from the hero
to the heroine at various intervals. In mainstream fiction,
perspective may expand to a number of core characters. Other
books, especially cozy mysteries, limited the perspective
to that of the sleuth, while a more intense thriller may also
get into the head of a criminal.
However you decide to tell your story, it is strongly recommended
to keep the perspective limited to one point of view within
a distinguishable scene. In other words, avoid the device
known as "head-hopping," where point of view changes
so swiftly within a passage that the reader might not know
who is thinking what. While telling a story from different
points of view is acceptable, it is suggested to make the
shifts obvious so the reader can keep track. Head-hopping
can be distracting to readers, and especially to editors who
might decide the manuscript is too muddled to fix in a reasonable
amount of time.
3) Dot-dot-dot
And now...we come to a device overused more than the comma...the
ellipsis. Yes, there is actually a name for the "dot-dot-dot"
that follows a trailed away thought, a break in conversation,
or a tease into a sudden action. Used properly, the ellipsis
indicates an omission of words; for example, if you have ever
seen a movie ad where Roger Ebert proclaims American Pie is
"The best film...of the year," there is a good chance
the film's PR people are spinning critics words and exaggerating
praise. For all we know, Ebert really said, "The best
film to walk out of when you're sick. Lord of the Rings is
the best film of the year."
In fiction, I often see ellipses unnecessarily used, whether
to enhance a character's flighty thought or conflict, or merely
to make the prose more dramatic. In truth, words are better
at doing that, and I would strongly advise any author who
wishes to overdress his fiction in dots, dashes, and other
superfluous characters to think twice. Stay to an active voice
and let your sentences flow.
Take this advice as you will. As writers, you are the most
comfortable with your style, but as you submit to editors
and publishers they may not find that same level of ease you
enjoy. Be judicious with punctuation and other devices, and
tighten that manuscript for a future sale.
Here are three common writing situations all authors should
consider in their craft.
Kathryn Lively offers book marketing tips to authors,
and writes for CINIVA, Virginia Beach website design
Writers – Cultivate that Winning
Streak
by Annette Young
Writers are continuously looking for ways to expand their
techniques, keep their writing fresh and finding writing opportunities
that can pay well. As such, they should not overlook the benefits
and potential of entering writing competitions. Benefits are
numerous; they help writers to generate a multitude of ideas,
to form additional focus and commitment to any given topic
as well as afford the opportunity to try out different styles
and techniques. Plus, they provide the opportunity to earn
some excellent cash prizes or other lucrative incentives.
Just as importantly, success in a writing competition can
provide an incredible boost to the writer’s confidence,
accelerating their individual progress on the publishing trail.
There are numerous writing competitions available whether
through traditional writing publications or through websites,
and there are equally numerous competition themes guaranteed
to stimulate the creative process. Because of the abundance
of available writing competitions, writers can easily pick
and choose the competition that inspires them the most and
this will provide them with a strong incentive to actually
start writing. Shopping around for a well-run competition
is beneficial, perhaps choosing those competitions with an
established record and where the website is updated regularly
– if it is an online event or publication. If there
are any doubts about the validity of the competition, either
contact the competition organiser for answers to any questions
or take your time and look for an equally inspiring but safer
to enter competition.
The whole competition process is often addictive to writers
as to be able to produce a submission worthy of winning a
prize, the writer must compete not only against other writers
– some of a high calibre but also, against themselves
by way of self motivation, determination, focus and imagination.
Many writers submit their work without checking spelling or
grammar and also without really having committed to a strong
idea and this means that the article will appear to lack focus
and purpose, something that the competition judges will immediately
notice.
For any writer seriously considering entering writing competitions,
it is important that they give themselves a fighting chance
and don’t make the fatal mistake of coming up with an
idea and thinking that it will be sufficient. Writing ideas
need to be cultivated, cosseted and allowed to grow –
sometimes developing into much better and stronger ideas with
impact. Just remember that judges are looking at a multitude
of areas when making that final decision – idea, style,
pace, word count, presentation and imagination. The best writers
could produce a well –written entry based on a weak
idea and they would be very unlikely to be placed.
Writers should cultivate that winning streak by being imaginative,
determined and by putting heart and soul into their submissions.
by Annette Young
www.annette-young.com
www.write-fiction.com
Five Ways to Write Deeper Fiction
By Lisa Dale
Lisa Dale has been published in many national literary
magazines and has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize and
for Best New American Voices.
If you want to enchant your audiences, considering upping
your writing game and exploring deeper ideas in your fiction.
It doesn't matter if you're writing thrillers, mysteries,
romances, science fiction, or erotica. The potential for writing
truly meaningful stories or novels is there. If you're writing
about humans (or even human-like non-humans), your plot is
primed for real insight. Here are some techniques that may
help inspire you to tackle meaningful issues.
Pay attention. To deepen your writing, you also need to deepen
your experience of your own life. Are you paying attention?
Watch for the details. When you see something that strikes
you as interesting, stop. Think deeply about why it's interesting
to you. Don't just say "it's interesting because it is."
Dig deep. The results will show in your writing.
Read. If you are reading widely, your writing will show it.
You'll have better techniques and a bigger worldview. Read
in as many genres as possible-not just the ones that you're
comfortable with. If your usual genre is mystery, challenge
yourself to read science fiction. Get out of your reading
comfort zone, and your readers will thank you.
What scares you? Think of the things that scare you most.
Losing money? Dinosaurs? Clowns? Or are you scared by the
issues: loss of human rights, gross unfairness in the coffee
trade, environmental hazards. Fear plays a part in every plot
in some way. Are you digging deep enough into what it means
to be afraid?
Grace. In our lives, we all experience moments of unexpected
grace. Grace brings us startling insight into ourselves or
others. Grace can show us fundamental human decency. Grace
can be forgiveness, self-realization, clarity, joy, and certainty.
The best moments of grace in fiction come when they are least
expected. What does grace mean to you? Do your characters
experience unexpected grace?
Slow down. To write thoughtful fiction, you can't expect to
write fast fiction. If you're shooting for X number of pages
each day, chances are you're more focused on meeting an artificial
goal than you are on writing unique, special, insightful content.
When you slow down and explore all the various nooks and crannies
(possibilities) for a given scene, you often deepen that scene.
You may not get to the finish line quickly, but you'll be
dancing as you go.
Lisa Dale has been published in many national literary magazines
and has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize and for Best New
American Voices. She also writes romance/women's fiction novels
for a major New York publishing house. Her first two novels,
SIMPLE WISHES and IT HAPPENED ONE NIGHT, are available for
purchase and/or pre-order.
Seminars and lectures (including a FREE! audio download) are
available on her website, http://www.LisaDaleBooks.com Her
blog, http://www.LisaDaleBlog.com, dissects, scrutinizes,
and tinkers with "how books work." PRIZES are given
away monthly on her LOVE TO READERS page. Come talk books
and say hi!
Writing to Win
by Annette Young
Writers often need a challenge to enable them to stay motivated
and to keep their creative muse burning bright and nothing
challenges a writer more than when entering a writing competition.
The very thought of pitting their wits against the imaginations
of others is enough to have some writers sweating blood and
tears as they pour out words onto the blank page. Some writers
can become incredibly successful when entering competitions
and because the benefits can be huge, it is not surprising
that they put a lot of time and effort into each entry.
Choosing the writing competition that inspires is a must however
and this is not difficult to do because there are numerous
competitions available that cover a wide variety of subjects.
Some competitions have an open theme whilst others provide
a theme which must be adhered to and these may be harder in
some respects because the guidelines are available for all
and this then calls for a very imaginative response from the
writer.
Finding a unique angle and interpreting the theme imaginatively
is not easy but it is necessary to enable the writer to have
a fighting chance of winning. Sometimes the first ideas that
spring to mind are not necessarily the best and it is useful
to mull over ideas before even committing the first words
to paper. Many writers will tend to think along the same lines
initially; and learning to open up new avenues from those
first suggestive thoughts is certainly worth exploring as
these can lead to real winning ideas that stand out from the
other submissions.
Whilst generating an exceptional idea is a real step in the
right direction, the actual standard of writing must also
be as good. An exceptional idea can quickly lose its advantage
with competition judges if the words do not flow, pace is
faltering and it is followed by poor spelling for example.
Allowing time to produce a well --written and imaginative
entry is essential even if some writers thrive on pressure,
there is often little time to make important changes if the
deadline is looming. Of course there will always be a degree
of luck involved as it can be dependant on who is judging
and of course, their criteria. Every effort should be made
to produce a tightly written and compelling entry that keeps
the judges hanging on to every word.
This challenge on the writer's ability to interpret a theme
and create something unique is what makes competition writing
exciting but a little forethought and increased creativity
can ensure a winning entry, cash prize and an endorsement
for the writer in addition.
Freelance writer/editor Creative Competitor
www.annette-young.com
www.write-fiction.com
Edit Your Novel In Three Easy Steps
by Nina Davies
You've finished your first draft. Congratulations! Now it's
time to step back for a few weeks and free your mind. After
you've taken a break, it's time to start editing.
Editing can be tough. It requres a different mindset from
the free-flowing approach many writers use with their first
draft. But don't worry. Follow the three steps outlined in
this article and your novel will soon be polished and ready
to send to an editor or agent.
Think of your novel as a 3-level house. The bottom layer,
or foundation, consists of your basic storyline. The next
layer consists of the scenes you've used to tell the story.
The top layer consists of the sentences you chose to bring
the scene to life.
Story --> Scenes --> Sentences
To create a strong novel you need to work from the bottom
up. First you evaluate the strengths and weaknesses of your
story, next you consider the scenes. Only after you have revised
your story and scene choices should you fiddle with individual
sentences and paragraphs. Using this method you avoid working
on a specific section only to decide that the whole scene
needs to be deleted!
Now let's look at each step in detail. The first task is
to ensure you have told a strong story. Brainstorm a list
of questions to help you evaluate your narrative. Some questions
to consider include:
- Does your main character have a goal that drives him/her
through the story?
- Is the external barrier that prevents the main character
from reaching his/her goal substantial enough to carry the
book?
- Is the book set in the correct physical location? The right
time period? At the right time of year?
Once you are satisfied with the arc of your story, you need
to analyze each individual scene to make it as strong as possible.
Again, list the important elements a scene should include
and evaluate your writing. Some issues to consider include:
- Does the point-of-view character have an objective during
this scene that is relevant to their story goal?
- Is there a good mix of narrative, dialogue, and introspection?
- Can the reader feel the emotions of the characters? Are
the emotions believable?
When you are satisfied with your story and scene structure,
it is time to work at the sentence and paragraph level. Hereýs
where you refine your word choices and sentence structure
to make your writing as strong as it can be. Make a list of
the criteria your writing should meet. For example:
- Do you vary your sentence length and avoid prolonged sections
with sentences of the same length?
- Do you avoid repetition of the same word or phrase?
- Do you minimize adverbs and other weak words like 'was/were',
'have/had', 'feel/felt', etc?
Once you've completed the third pass through your manuscript,
you can be confident you've considered all of the important
elements.
But what if you have trouble brainstorming the right questions
to ask at each stage. Consider saving time by finding an existing
checklist. You can find many online, including the one I recommend
(available from AutoCrit, of course!)
Good luck with your editing. It's the key to turning 'first
draft' into 'fabulous'.
You've finished your first draft. Congratulations! Now it's
time to step back for a few weeks and free your mind. After
you've taken a break, it's time to start editing.
Editing can be tough. It requres a different mindset from
the free-flowing approach many writers use with their first
draft. But don't worry. Follow the three steps outlined in
this article and your novel will soon be polished and ready
to send to an editor or agent.
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Fiction Writing Tips:
How Do You Find the Time to Write Fiction?
Whenever an aspiring writer speaks to me about fiction writing
tips, one of the most frequently asked questions is: how do
you find the time to write?
The answer I want to give, "just do it," doesn't
quite suffice. So in this article, we'll examine the matter
in a little more detail.
We live in a busy world, with numerous demands on our time:
jobs, spouses, children, draining work commutes, TV shows
we want to watch, emails to read and respond to, phone calls
to family and friends. When you look at your daily schedule,
it may appear that you simply don't have time to write.
Well, I've got both good and bad news for you.
The good news: even with a tight schedule, you can still get
work done. The bad news? Something in your lifestyle will
have to suffer, or change, to accommodate your fiction writing.
There are no short cuts, no easy answers. You've got to get
creative--and motivated.
For example, do you get a lunch break at your job? Start taking
a notepad with you and using that time--even if it's only
thirty minutes--to work on your stories. Do you commute to
work via carpool, bus, or subway? Instead of reading the newspaper
or listening to music on your iPod, plug away on your novel.
One of the keys to productivity is learning how to identify
those pockets of free time during the day, and then using
them to your benefit. It's not as hard as you may think. In
fact, when you really examine your daily schedule, you might
be astounded at how much you could accomplish.
Can you do some fiction writing while your children are playing,
eating, or napping? Could you scribble or dictate a few paragraphs
while waiting in line somewhere? Zip out some prose as you
wait for dinner to cook?
And yes, you might even have to give up some things. Do you
really have to watch all of those TV shows every week? Do
you have to spend hours on social networking web sites, accomplishing
nothing in particular?
Locate the "fat" in your life, trim it out, and
replace it with some fiction writing! Even if all you can
manage is just one hour a day, that is something. Do a page
an hour and you'll have a solid draft in 9 - 10 months, which
isn't so bad at all.
You can do it. Really. Starting today.
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Tips to Start Collecting Ideas for
Your Novel
by Derry Sampey
Don't you just love it when non-writers assume that all a
writer needs to do is sit around and wait to be struck by
inspiration, then pound out a best-seller and become fabulously
wealthy overnight? Yeah, me too!
If sitting around doesn't work for you, either, there are
plenty of other ways to accumulate story ideas. And once you
have good ideas, it doesn't take a lot of effort to turn them
into good stories. The process may not be quite as effortless
as waiting for inspiration to strike, but if you follow these
easy steps that have worked well for countless other writers,
you will soon find yourself on the creative path to success!
The first thing you must do is be prepared to gather information
that will stimulate the development of good story ideas. To
accomplish this, you need to carry a pen and notepad or a
voice recorder of some kind. If you don't log information
about people and events right away, you might forget important
details about them by the time you are able to get to your
keyboard.
The poet William Wordsworth once said that successful writing
comes from emotion recollected in tranquility, which obviously
worked well for him. Did he take notes? Who knows? But Wordsworth
did not have a full-time job, nor did he keep up the yard,
shop for groceries or put up with the 1,001 other distractions
most of us deal with on a daily basis. So be prepared to record
snippets of conversations and descriptions of interesting
sights and sounds, as well as all of the ideas and emotions
they arouse in you.
Where do you start? That's easy. Study the people around
you, in stores, at meetings, on planes. Who are they? What
kind of lives do they lead? What caught your attention about
certain ones? Politely eavesdrop on other diners in restaurants
or on people waiting in lines with you. You will overhear
the most amazing, not to mention extremely useful, story ideas!
Jog your memory by reading your old diaries or journals.
If you don't have any, then read other people's published
diaries and journals. Let your mind turn the words into videos
that kindle ideas and emotions leading to perfect story-starters.
Listen to music that moves you. From classical concertos to
golden oldies, music is the background of our lives, so mine
it for old memories or new ideas. Lie in the grass and stare
at the clouds. Where have they been? Where are they going?
Where would you like to go, and why?
Study both human interest and hard news stories in periodicals
and on the Internet. Let an odd twist or turn you read or
hear about kick-start your imagination. Or borrow fascinating
fragments from other people's lives and mix and match them
for your own use. Browse through your high school yearbooks.
What do you think happened to some of the people pictured
in them? (Even better, ask yourself what you hope happened!)
After you have gathered some good story ideas, choose several
that appear ripe for development. Next, analyze them to decide
about the fiction genres into which they fit. Mystery? Romance?
Comedy? When you have made your decisions, write several paragraphs
roughing out a plot for each one.
About the Author
Derry Sampey has been an English and journalism teacher,
newspaper reporter and editor, ad agency editorial director,
freelance writer for several newspapers and magazines, book
editor and short fiction contestant. In addition, she has
worked as a writing coach and conducted numerous writing seminars.
She is currently the senior editor for http://www.NewBookPublishing.com.
Does Your Plot Suit Your Characters
And Vice-Versa?
by RAVI KUMAR
Creative Writing Tips -When an idea comes to us for a short
story, we either think of a story line first or a character
first. Whichever we think of first, and later on build, we
have to make sure the plot and the character suit each other.
Example one - We think of a story line first. Your story
is set in a rural area. A company opens a factory and employs
workers from that small town. The residents welcome this,
as there aren’t many jobs going around. The management
takes advantage of that fact and exploit the workers.
Using a technicality in the system, perhaps listing them
under different job titles in their books, they pay them less
than they are entitled. Your main character sees this injustice
and leads the workers to rebel against the management.
Now in a plot like this you will need your main character
to posses certain qualities. Like... Leadership
To be able to lead the people to rebel.
Convincing
The workers are from a rural area. Some might be uneducated
and not aware of their rights. The main character has to convince
them that what the management is doing, is wrong.
Persuader
Living in a rural area, jobs are hard to find. Most of the
workers will view the company as their savior. Their thinking
will be that receiving little money is better than none at
all. The main character has to persuade them that being in
a rural area the company needs them as much as the workers
need the company.
Strong Personality and Confident
We need a strong character that will see things through to
the end. We don’t want someone giving up when things
get tough. He will also need to be confident that he is doing
the right thing (not to make things worse for the workers)
and believes in himself (knowing what he’s doing is
right).
Strong people skills
To be able to speak and relate to people on all levels.
Negotiator
To negotiate a solution with management and workers.
Public speaker skills
To be able to address this mass group of workers, in a voice
that is confident, persuading, authoritative etc. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So these are the qualities we will need our character to
have.
Now let’s see if we can make him believable. Remember
he lives in the same rural area, so what makes him different
from the rest of the workers who are willing to settle for
less?
I could say he recently move to that rural area from the city.
He used to work as a union leader and wanted to get out of
the rat race. But having fought for workers rights his entire
career, he can’t stand now to see injustices and comes
to the decision to fight for them and himself.
So this character would suit our plot because we need someone
like him for our story.
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Example two - Thinking of a character first
We notice a man on the street. Something about him triggers
our interest so we decide to write about him in a short story.
So at this point we will build the character first and then
work a story around him.
Let’s go back to where we saw him...
He’s walking briskly along a busy street. He’s
in a hurry. He’s dressed in a three-piece suit, which
indicates he might be a businessman. He’s got a stack
of documents under his arm; a briefcase in his left hand and
his right hand is occupied by holding the phone to his ear,
which he’s shouting into.
Let’s observe him closer...
He’s in his mid thirties. He looks authoritative. Perhaps
he has his own business. Why is he shouting into the phone?
Perhaps one of his employees made a mistake, which has cost
the character a lot of money.
What if this employee made the mistake on purpose? What if
he’s secretly working for the opposition, planted to
destroy the main character’s company? What if the owner
of that opposing company is the main character’s own
brother? Etc...
So as we analyze this character and ask questions about him,
our plot begins to unfold.
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Plots and characters have to suit each other.
When we have finished plotting and are ready to write the
story, they shouldn’t be ill-fitting pieces of a puzzle
- They should be a perfect match.
Does your plot suit your characters and vice-versa?
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Working and Writing Full-time If I Can, You Can
by Eric Penz
I began writing my first novel in 1997. Six years, five
drafts (give or take), two sons, and one major surgery later
it was finally complete. Then it took another two years to
get Cryptid published and on bookstore shelves. And don’t
even ask how much Cryptid has earned me. The gravy train is
certainly gaining speed, but don’t ever fool yourself
that writing novels is a get-rich-quick scheme. Even the big
boys like Crichton, Koontz, and Cussler will tell you that.
The best-case scenario is a get-rich-slow—eternally
slow—scheme. Which is to say, don’t quit your
day job.
Ah, but then where does one find the time, resources, energy,
and muse to write after coming home from slaving for the Man
(or Woman) all day?
Well, that’s the million-dollar question. Actually,
it’s only half the question. The whole question is where
does one find the time, resources, energy, and muse to write
after working all day... and then cooking dinner, doing the
dishes, helping the kids with their homework, paying bills,
cutting the grass, washing the cars, checking your email,
doing your nails, going for a run, seeing a movie, getting
the flu, finishing your degree... need I go on?
We all have twenty-four hours in the day, even the big boys
like Crichton, Koontz, and Cussler. Life happens to us all.
Just ask Stephen King what a crimp his car accident put on
his writing.
We all have a list of reasons to not write. They’re
not excuses, really. Life doesn’t leave much room for
excuses. So don’t add guilt to that list. But that doesn’t
change the fact that you’ve only written a thousand
words in the past six weeks, does it? Then what’s the
answer? How did I do it?
Well, it took me six years. So one answer is simply that
I didn’t quit. Little-by-little, day-by-day, year-by-year
I worked at it until it was done. But be more specific. Exactly
how did I find the time? OK, well another answer is that I
woke my computer every night at 9 PM, Sunday through Thursday,
and worked until midnight or 1 AM. I did this religiously
for six years, sometimes working seven days straight.
I took a two-year commercial fiction course at the University
of Washington. I was part of a weekly critique group for three
years. I immersed myself in the craft. I did everything I
could to make myself the best craftsman possible. Does that
help?
No, I’m sure it doesn’t, because you’re
not me. You will not be able to work at the craft in the same
way I do. You may work a double shift for the Man and the
Woman and not be able to write from 9 PM to 1 AM every night.
So here’s the answer you’re really after, though
you’re not going to like it because it means there’s
no short cut, no magic recipe that you can simply follow and
be assured success.
You see, the million-dollar answer is that I quit.
Or at least I tried to; many, many times I tried to. But
I couldn’t. You know why? Because writing is not something
I do, it is something I am. I’m a writer. So there is
no quitting. I cannot quit being who I am. I can only accept
who I am. And once I did, I never failed to find time to write.
My cars may not sparkle, I hired someone to cut the grass,
and I often sleep less than eight hours a night, but I write.
So my advise to you is to quit. And if you can, then you’re
not a writer. It’s OK. Not everyone is. Then find out
what you are and do that, but don’t go back to writing.
The craft is too hard and the rewards too slow in coming to
labor at it unless you have to. And writers have to.
However, if you can’t quit then you are a writer. And
once you realize that you can only find joy in life if writing
is a part of your life, then you will find the time. I promise
you. And it won’t be my way; it’ll be your way.
Just don’t quit your day job. It may not be who you
are, but it will pay the bills until who you are is a writer
whose name is listed in the same sentence with the big boys.
Eric Penz is the author of Cryptid: The Lost Legacy of
Lewis and Clark. Did Lewis and Clark meet Bigfoot? Visit Eric's
Web site for more information, http://www.ericpenz.com
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Writing Ideas – Stimulate your
Inner Creativity
Writing ideas are needed in abundance if you are planning
to become a professional writer at some point. For many would-be
writers, it is not their ability to write well and with passion
that is the difficulty but the ability to generate good writing
ideas and this of course is paramount to success. Acquiring
this ability is not too difficult; it is merely a matter of
changing your mind set so that you can view the world and
its contents through different eyes and once you are able
to do this, writing ideas should flow.
Writing ideas come in all shapes and forms and inspiration
can strike in the strangest ways such as a flippant remark,
a TV ad, a photo or maybe even a song lyric. To start stimulating
your inner creativity so that you can generate many writing
ideas, begin by studying the following:
- Practice people watching, people really do and say the
funniest things, there is just so much human interest untapped
potential all around you that you may as well make use of
it. Be discreet however.
- Keep a writing journal. Whenever you do get an idea, make
sure to note it because even if it is not relevant currently,
at some point, it could be just the idea you crave.
- Go for a long walk. Fresh air and beautiful scenery is
wonderful for clearing flagging creativity. Writing ideas
need stimulation and by experiencing natural beauty all
around, you are bound to become inspired.
- Meet up with other writers. Writing can be such a lonely
and isolating occupation that by meeting others it is possible
to become inspired through conversation with others who
share your passion for the written word. Join a local writing
group or attend a college course and this will help you
to be able to focus on the areas of improvement you need.
- Practise writing ‘what if’ scenarios. These
are quick and easy writing tasks which require one or two
paragraphs relating to a person, conflict or a theme and
this can help break down writers block and open up the creative
channels.
Providing you keep an open mind and a natural curiosity for
the world around you, you will start to rediscover your potential
for discovering fresh writing ideas.
Annette Young is the Editor of www.creative-competitor.co.uk
a site dedicated to providing creative opportunities and incentives
to all participants. Annette also teaches creative writing,
journalism and runs private courses and a critique service.
Writing Fiction – How to Make
your Characters Come to Life
When writing fiction, it is important to be able to have
an interesting plot and several well developed characters
that your readers (should you get published) will begin to
care about. Characters after all, can make or break a story
or novel because if you do not manage to make them become
believable entities, why should anyone wish to continue to
read? Writing fiction is about providing pure escapism and
helping the reader to be able to submerge themselves into
your story so that they can forget the trials and tribulations
of their own existence. If you are a new writer and are considering
writing fiction, you need to really think about where your
story is going and how you yourself can start to believe in
your characters as this is a required element.
When writing fiction and developing characters, you can make
life easier for yourself by paying attention to the following
steps:
- Know what type of story you are going to write. Make sure
that you know exactly what is going to happen from start
to finish. You may find that this changes the
general direction you have originally envisaged, however
as your characters grow within the story, when it happens,
it means that the characters are starting to come to life.
- Think about the type of characters who would be required
to support the plot. Your characters also need to be multi-faceted.
Let them have some faults or annoying habits, but also give
them some positive traits-even the villain of the piece
is unlikely to be all bad. Writing fiction is a little like
playing god, you will know when you have really started
to connect with them because you will have reservations
about endangering them or writing them out of your story.
- Provide a detailed history of their lives before you start
writing your story. You do not need to list every aspect
of this list to your readers but it does help you as the
author to know your character inside out. This way, you
can have some element within their past which affects how
they react to specific situations. This makes them human….and
believable.
- Throw some conflicting situations at your characters.
How they cope with these difficult situations will help
them to develop and it will also help your readers to connect
with them. When writing fiction, you will find new and improved
ideas which will keep both your interest and those of your
reader becoming stronger and more influential.
Whether writing a short story or novel, some basic planning
is essential as this not only helps the writer to continue
the plot through to the end sentence but helps the writer
to create believable characters that are alive and kicking
and this is an important part when writing fiction.
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Annette Young is the Editor of www.creative-competitor.co.uk
a site dedicated to providing creative opportunities and incentives
to all participants. Annette also teaches creative writing,
journalism and runs private courses and a critique service.
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